Your friend has a travel company and would like you to come and work with him.
Write a letter replying to your friend's offer. In your letter:
• explain what you know about your friend's company
• choose whether you accept or decline the offer
• give reasons for your choice
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Frank,
Hello, how are you? I hope you are having a joyous time. I received your letter yesterday and was glad to know that you have offered me a job in your travel company.
I am very excited to know that you have started your own travel company and have gave a kick-start to your business career. Moreover, I am thrilled to know that your company is expanding successfully and earning goo profits. Furthermore, you have also included the destination vacation to Maldives which is not offered by any other travel company.
I regret to inform you that I will not be able to join your company as a travel agent as I have been recently appointed as a senior manager in IDFC Mutual Funds.
This job profile will help me not only to enhance my skills and knowledge but will also aid me in developing a successful professional career. Additionally, they are offering many opportunities of growth prospects in future.
I am very happy for you and I am sure you will excel in your business very rapidly.
Take care and All the best for your future.
With love,
Prabhpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ered me a job in your travel company. I am very excited to know that you have s...
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Line 5, column 82, Rule ID: GAVE_GIVE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'give'?
Suggestion: give
...tarted your own travel company and have gave a kick-start to your business career. M...
^^^^
Line 5, column 82, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'given'.
Suggestion: given
...tarted your own travel company and have gave a kick-start to your business career. M...
^^^^
Line 9, column 215, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... many opportunities of growth prospects in future. I am very happy for you and I am sur...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 17, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r future. With love, Prabhpreet Kaur
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 905.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68911917098 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63498885377 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575129533679 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 288.0 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3941880389 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.4166666667 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0833333333 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342946324385 0.216113520407 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127954993888 0.0766984524023 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0901799531106 0.0603063233224 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176775536577 0.12726935374 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102556682583 0.0580467560999 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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