Your friend invited you to his/her birthday party, but you were unable to attend. Write a letter to apologize for your absence. In your letter:
• State why you could not go
• Explain your reason for not contacting your friend sooner
• Suggest another time to meet
Dear Tuan,
How are you, my friend? I believe I owe you an apology for not showing up at your birthday party at your house last Saturday.
You know, I couldn’t be there because there was an emergent surgical case at my hospital and my senior asked for a back-up while other colleagues were too far away. Apparently, I was the only one to assist him. The surgery went through 3 hours and I was exhausted, so I couldn’t stop by your house after that.
As you can see, this was such a spontaneous incident that I didn’t expect at all. At first, I thought the surgery was going to be over quickly. But, since it went out of hand, I couldn’t give you a call and I’m really sorry about this. I hope that you’ll understand and forgive my absence.
Last, please let me make it up to you by buying you a drink this Sunday. I’ll be totally free from work and I’m sure you’ll be too.
I’m looking forward to receiving your call soon.
Your friend,
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- Some people think that an advertisement on TV is useless and others disagree Discuss both sides and give your opinion 59
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, first, look, really, so, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 822.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59217877095 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66015663445 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.659217877095 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6080691329 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.5 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9166666667 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 4.34317383033 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255518550868 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123316144037 0.0766984524023 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125926913916 0.0603063233224 209% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15658784927 0.12726935374 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101090700641 0.0580467560999 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.75 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.71 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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