Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
• say why a driving licence is advantageous
• recommend a driving school
• give any extra guidance/tip
Dear Dev,
Hope you and your family are doing well during this pandemic. I was informed that you are looking to go for driving class. It is indeed, very good decision to have your own driving license as you are your own driver and it is much safe than relying on others to drive to your destination. I have experienced that driving by self is time saving and economical. We can change our decision of destination at our convenience.
I had the license recently and I went to Gulf driving school, one of the reputed driving school in Doha. We often find promotional offer from the driving schools however the wait time is too long. So I would not suggest you to trust those advertisement as you might have to wait forever and the even if you start the class, the trainers are in rush to complete the course to accommodate the next trainee in queue. The dedicated trainers in Gulf driving school are much helpful and professional. They target in success stories. They are flexible regarding the training timings. Hence I recommend you this school because they genuinely value the customers.
You are always welcome if you require any tips from my end as I too used to seek advice and tips from the ones who are licensed. I used to view the YouTube and take the tips and strategies of passing different levels of test. After the enrollment you will have to schedule the signal test. Mock tests will be provided through mobile application, after passing the signal. You will be trained for the parking test and then to the road test. However you will have to pass one test before you are scheduled for the next one.
It would go long if I explain you everything in written .You can call me anytime at my number for further advice or experience.
Take care
Best Regards,
Shama
- Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice Write a letter to your friend In your letter say why a driving licence is advantageous recommend a driving school give any extra guidance tip 78
- Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice Write a letter to your friend In your letter say why a driving licence is advantageous recommend a driving school give any extra guidance tips 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 233, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this advertisement' or 'those advertisements'?
Suggestion: this advertisement; those advertisements
...ng. So I would not suggest you to trust those advertisement as you might have to wait forever and t...
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Line 3, column 577, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...lexible regarding the training timings. Hence I recommend you this school because the...
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Line 4, column 226, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...es of passing different levels of test. After the enrollment you will have to schedul...
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Line 4, column 440, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...parking test and then to the road test. However you will have to pass one test before y...
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Line 5, column 56, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...g if I explain you everything in written .You can call me anytime at my number for...
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Line 5, column 57, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: You
...if I explain you everything in written .You can call me anytime at my number for fu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, look, regarding, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.48453608247 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 937.175257732 156% => OK
No of words: 319.0 206.0 155% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59561128527 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 3.78020617076 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45285336248 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 127.690721649 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545454545455 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 459.0 290.88556701 158% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 12.6804123711 158% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.0097663328 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.3 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.95 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.55 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.94845360825 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.174907361338 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054767778743 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680508333215 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110306679845 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0842205300738 0.0580467560999 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.1 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 41.2886597938 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.