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Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to complain about the faulty TV which we bought the last week from your store.
I am mikesh Khanal, one of the most frequent buyers from your store. I have bought electronic gadgets from your shop for my office and home likewise since early 2000’s.
The television did not function as intended; it did not even start at all. In addition to that, the remote that came along was physically damaged. I have been regularly calling your service centre, but they either tender me an unacceptable apology and inform me that it will take nearly a week to repair as all the engineers are occupied with priority tasks or they hang upon me.
I would like you to not only replace this equipment but also dig deep into the working of your service centre to understand the reason behind these delays. I no longer have the patience to wait for a week.
Yours faithfully,
mikesh khanal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to complain abo...
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...ght the last week from your store. I am mikesh Khanal, one of the most freq...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e most frequent buyers from your store. I have bought electronic gadgets from you...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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... likewise since early 2000's. The television did not function as inten...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...iority tasks or they hang upon me. I would like you to not only replace thi...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...erstand the reason behind these delays. I no longer have the patience to wait for...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...e the patience to wait for a week. Yours faithfully, mikesh khanal
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, likewise, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 809.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96319018405 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35525299726 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.717791411043 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 234.0 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0289412681 44.8134815571 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8888888889 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1111111111 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115958685713 0.216113520407 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450495091012 0.0766984524023 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0295230806308 0.0603063233224 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.06526494292 0.12726935374 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0283153078408 0.0580467560999 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.