Your local council is considering of closing down a sports and leisure centre that it runs , in order to save money . write a letter to the local council in your letter.
* give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre * explain why the sports and leisure centre is important for the local community. * describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes.
Dear Sir,
I am writing concerning the plan to close down the sports and leisure centre in our neighborhood in order to cut the government expenditure. As you know that this is the only sports and recreational centre we have in the neighborhood, closing it down would greatly affect the community negatively because families and young people make use of this public facility regularly.
Let me explain the situation in detail. Most families and people of all ages use the centre everyday for physical exercise such as jogging, cycling and brisk walking. The centre also serves as the only spacious venue available for social events such as birthday and wedding anniversary celebration.
Therefore, closing it down would affect the social development and healthy lifestyle of the local people as there will be no alternative place for physical exercise and social events . Instead of closing it down completely , I would be better if fee can be charged for using the centre for social events in order to cover the cost for running the centre.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Kayode Olakunle
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing concerning the plan to clos...
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Line 5, column 93, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...s and people of all ages use the centre everyday for physical exercise such as jogging, ...
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Line 7, column 183, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... for physical exercise and social events . Instead of closing it down completely ,...
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Line 7, column 223, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... . Instead of closing it down completely , I would be better if fee can be charged...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, such as, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 32.9175257732 46% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 945.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.19230769231 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7691537388 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604395604396 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.2511701161 44.8134815571 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 76.5299724578 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2222222222 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257641809196 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108738602446 0.0766984524023 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465717237174 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145653207721 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491487744337 0.0580467560999 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 8.37731958763 156% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 70.7449484536 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 8.71597938144 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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