Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money.Write a letter to the local council. In your letter, you should give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre; you should explain why the sports and leisure centre is important for the local community; you should describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes
Dear Sir,
I am writing you this letter to raise my concern about the decision taken to close the fitness centre on 4th Street. The centre is actively used by my family and friends and unavailability of this facility would definitely be unfavourable for us.
Let me explain to you, all my family members consider keeping fit an important factor, so, we visit the sports centre regularly exercise and running. Also, the elderly neighbour gets together once a week at the fitness club to play bingo, to sit with their friends, chit-chat and have a good time. If you close the centre this would affect everyone.
Moreover, the district annual sports are held in the sports centre, closing the place would probbably leave the local communities with no other place to continue the annual sports.
I hope you will consider my request and take neccesary actions.
Your's Faithfully
William Coles
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 299, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...riends, chit-chat and have a good time. If you close the centre this would affect ...
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Line 7, column 102, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...entre, closing the place would probbably leave the local communities with no othe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 761.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 150.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07333333333 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49676234797 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.713333333333 0.622605031667 115% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7247474119 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.125 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241748591487 0.216113520407 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100036896713 0.0766984524023 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441914360247 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117939446638 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0228461082597 0.0580467560999 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 8.71597938144 139% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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