Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to share my concern over your decision to close the community center. This center is an important part of our life where people of all ages can visit and share the time together depending on their interest.
Me and my family are active visitors to the centre. I am a regular basketball player and has been spending my evening time since childhood with my friends at this centre.This place is a central hub for all my friends to gather, play sports and enjoy different indoor activities. My father is also an active participant in badminton club where he along with his friends play regularly to be fit and healthy. While for my mother the park is a great place for a walk to rejuvenate from daily chores.
Many events are organised in the central foyer like birthday parties, weeding anniversary and local get to gather which enhances the love between community. We all have our different shares of time spent at this centre, many of us grow in this facility while for our locality this place is a pivotal point as it provides us a base where we all can connect and support other in their different problems of life.
Closing of this club will have a significant ramification to our lives. No place will be available for us to play any kind of sports, local harmony will be impacted as there will be no central place to meet and greet people. Togetherness that was achieved by a single centre will slowly deprive as there will be no communication and social gathering.
Therefore I request you to please consider all these factors before closing, if any monetary help is needed we all are ready to raise funds and support in every possible way to assist you in keeping this centre in place.
Yours Sincerely,
Gunjan
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Suggestion:
...ase where we all can connect and support other in their different problems of lif...
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Suggestion: Therefore,
... communication and social gathering. Therefore I request you to please consider all th...
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Suggestion:
...re in place. Yours Sincerely, Gunjan
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, while, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.48453608247 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 26.3917525773 152% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 937.175257732 157% => OK
No of words: 312.0 206.0 151% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70512820513 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 3.78020617076 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52541323976 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 127.690721649 143% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583333333333 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 470.7 290.88556701 162% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.9986551773 44.8134815571 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.923076923 76.5299724578 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 16.8248392259 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116816412536 0.216113520407 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0477978336886 0.0766984524023 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0442154180068 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0602145521073 0.12726935374 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0282414246808 0.0580467560999 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 8.37731958763 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 70.7449484536 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 41.2886597938 160% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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