Dear Raj,
Hope this letter finds you in best of the health and radiant spirits. First, I want to congratulate you for your new house, hopefully it brings all the happiness and success to you.
As moving into the new house can be quite tiring, while at the same time you may need time to adjust to your locality. So to relax you a bit, I have decided to give you Amazon's Alexa. There are lot of things that you can do with this amazing device which is controlled by voice. You can listen to endless music, create play list, assign task to alexa and ask anything from the device and it will fill you with all sorts of information.
I know that you are quite ecstatic about new technologies and perhaps this is the best of this generation with lots of feature that will assist you in your daily life. It will help you relax , it can be your companion when you are lonely and also assist in your daily task and studies. Intention behind this gift is to help you focus and at the same time makes you happy.
I will order it form Amazon and it will be directly delivered to your house. The delivery will take 3-4 days to reach and I will mention evening time so you will be present at home to collect the item.
I will be looking forward to meeting you and hope you enjoy this present.
Yours Faithfully,
Gunjan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 142, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to your locality. So to relax you a bit, I have decided to give you Amazons Alex...
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Line 5, column 145, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...your locality. So to relax you a bit, I have decided to give you Amazons Alexa. ...
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Line 7, column 112, Rule ID: LOTS_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun feature seems to be countable; consider using: 'lots of features'.
Suggestion: lots of features
...his is the best of this generation with lots of feature that will assist you in your daily life...
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Line 7, column 191, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... your daily life. It will help you relax , it can be your companion when you are l...
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Line 7, column 355, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s to help you focus and at the same time makes you happy. I will order it form...
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Line 9, column 17, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'forms'?
Suggestion: forms
...me makes you happy. I will order it form Amazon and it will be directly delivere...
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Line 9, column 62, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...Amazon and it will be directly delivered to your house. The delivery will take 3-...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, may, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 4.92783505155 304% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1078.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 248.0 206.0 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34677419355 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.12406901174 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54435483871 0.622605031667 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 334.8 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.7201152491 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.9230769231 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0769230769 16.8248392259 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.84615384615 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.404867663023 0.216113520407 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.175375653915 0.0766984524023 229% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0621455824126 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.260828258348 0.12726935374 205% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036454880777 0.0580467560999 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.95 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.