Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure center that it runs, in order to save
money. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter
1-give details of how you and your friend or family use the center
2-explain why the center is important for the local community
3-describe the possible effects on local people if the center closes
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to tell you that me along with my friends are using the leisure center so regular in every weekends.The center offers us to practice gym, recreation, social network and many more facilities as well.I often went there with my friends in our spare times and hangout there at least twice in a day.
The center is so crucial for various reasons.It allows my neighbours to meet and great every evening.It encourages children through various indoor sports.As it has its own library, so children's who are so fond of comic books by spending their time occasionally.It has a friendly atmosphere that bind the community to a large extent.this center was also essential for elder people who has retired.this leisure club has also become the center of attention for many tourist who visit this area to a large extent.
I believe that if the center will shut down then the future outcomes might backfire as such, people and their social bonding will collapse, children's playground and their only recreational playground will disappear, community will have to go elsewhere which is so far; approximately10 kilometer distance from the leisure center that might create a chaos near future.
I, therefore, hope and believe that you will consider these grounds as high priority and review before shut the center down from here.
I am waiting to hear more from you Sincerely,
Mohaimen
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, therefore, well, at least
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1206.0 937.175257732 129% => OK
No of words: 236.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11016949153 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68199921573 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627118644068 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 290.88556701 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 47.0 16.3608247423 287% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 163.471832436 44.8134815571 365% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 241.2 76.5299724578 315% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 47.2 16.8248392259 281% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.0 4.34317383033 207% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131838930596 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0710310993626 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0347015766576 0.0603063233224 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0723061554991 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356851736426 0.0580467560999 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.2 8.37731958763 313% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 32.23 70.7449484536 46% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.4 7.45979381443 273% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.25 8.71597938144 152% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 7.59969072165 124% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 8.62886597938 313% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.8 8.54432989691 243% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 27.0 8.15463917526 331% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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