Your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure centre that it runs in order to save money.
Write a letter to the local council. In your letter,
give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre
explain why the sports and leisure centre is important for the local community
describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closes
Dear Sir,
I am Shreyas Parab residing in Shiv Prasad, Indralok Phase 2. I and my family have been living here for more than two decades; we are active members of the sports centre since it has been operational. My parents use the fitness centre along with practising yoga daily at the premises whereas, I prefer practising tennis and swimming at the centre keeping myself fit and enthusiast.
This Sports complex is of vital importance to the local community. This centre not only attracts people for being fit and healthy but also brings them together prosperousing their bonding among the community. Out of their busy schedule, one gets really refreshed and stay mentally fit doing something they like at the leisure centre.
It is very hard to hear that due to the monetary deficit, the council is looking to shut the complex. Shutting the place will lead to high obesity and increases in diabetic issues in the milieu. Furthermore, there is no other place to do physical activities unfortunately leading to an increase in the unhealthy population of the city.
Its a request, to not to close the only sports and leisure centre in the area. I am also sending a copy of this letter to the local newspaper, to save the centre.
Yours faithfully,
Shreyas Parab
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...the unhealthy population of the city. Its a request, to not to close the only spo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, look, really, so, thus, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1054.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.85714285714 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5988904073 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645161290323 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7061253321 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.8333333333 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0833333333 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58333333333 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205471871542 0.216113520407 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696270931535 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605331448836 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110413265829 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.078927344632 0.0580467560999 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.