Your local council is considering closing a sport and leisure centre that it runs, in order to save money.
Write a letter to the local council, in your letter,
- Give details of how you and your friends or family use the centre.
- Explain why the centre is important for the local community.
- Describe the possible effects on local people if the centre closed.
I am writing this letter to draw your attention to the importance of fitness club in this area. Unfortunately, closing this center have a few drawbacks for the locals and I will explain my reasons in the following.
This center has provided a variety of facilities for locals in all ages groups. To explain more, a board range of running machines are available for youngsters and middle aged people. Furthermore, recently, a few exercising classes such as yoga and Pilates has been run for the pensioners. Besides, children have been well catered in this club while their parents are doing exercises.
I would say, this fitness club is important for most residents in this area. At first, it is easy walking distance for most settlements. Furthermore, some youths have launched a coffee shop and restaurant there which make the center more pleasant and enjoyable.
In my opinion, closing this venue is not a good idea for some reasons. Firstly, locals have to drive to other gyms, which are far away from them. In fact, not only it is too costly for them, it will also increase congestion and air pollution in the city. Apart from that, a large fraction of staff, trainers and even freelance people will be unemployed.
I hope you weigh all sides and then make a reasonable decision for this center.
Thank you so much for your consideration.
Best regards,
Elham Mousavi,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...deration. Best regards, Elham Mousavi,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, furthermore, so, then, well, while, apart from, in fact, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1148.0 937.175257732 122% => OK
No of words: 235.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88510638298 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66348988383 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621276595745 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 348.3 290.88556701 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.5636460623 44.8134815571 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.75 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6875 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 4.34317383033 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0932638727743 0.216113520407 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0340620686341 0.0766984524023 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0428087642794 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0625495413863 0.12726935374 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552821157914 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.49 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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