Your local council has decided to close the only park in your town and build a car park in its place. You believe this will have a bad effect on the people who live and work in the town.
Write a letter to the mayor. In your letter
introduce yourself
explain why you think the decision is wrong
say what you think the council should do instead
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to complain about the local council's decision to close the park of our district.
I am a resident of the district 9, down town California and I have been living same neighborhood for 30 years. Over the years I have seen many buildings are constructed and natural greenly depleted gradually. I believe this happened due to lack of planning from the district council. Now, we are left with this only park, where children use to play in the evening, and young and old people come here for regular exercise and breathe in fresh air. If this park is replaced by car parking, people will have no other option but to stay indoors which is hazardous to their health. I believe council should reconsider their decision and come up with a better solution.
I would like to suggest that the council should pass a regulation that states that all the new constructions, whether residential or commercial use, should build their own car parking area under the basement. By this way, the district will have enough space for car parking and people can enjoy natural beauty.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Jonathan smith.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 338, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...eft with this only park, where children use to play in the evening, and young and o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 981.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 201.0 206.0 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88059701493 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54459981979 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661691542289 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8402990676 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1818181818 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2727272727 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.54545454545 4.34317383033 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.28294946764 0.216113520407 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.093668075485 0.0766984524023 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0409916039352 0.0603063233224 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135683472145 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619230123645 0.0580467560999 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.