Your local hospital has advertised for people to do unpaid work helping at the hospital. You would like to do some work at the hospital in your free time.
Write a letter to the hospital. In your letter,
1. Explain why you would like to do unpaid work at the hospital
2. Say what type of unpaid work you would be able to do
3. Give details of when you would be available for this work
write not less than 150 words
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to let you know that I am interested in doing volunteer work at your establishment in my spare time. The position was advertised on the local newspaper last week Friday.
Recently, I learnt through a radio advertisement that Saint John Health Centre is understaffed and have requested from authorities additional work force to cater for the shortfall. In addition, I have great passion for helping people who need assistance most especially those who are ill.
Let me explain in details my skills and capabilities. I am a hygiene and sanitation officer by profession so working in the sanitary department would not be new for me. I can work effectively unsupervised in cleaning the both the private and public wards, the theatre and the laboratory.
Based on my normal work schedule, it seems I would have plenty of free time from 15th March, which is next month, and would like to put in ten hours weekly. Working twice a week on Monday's and Friday's in the late afternoons would be fine for me.
I look forward in hearing from you at your earliest convenience.
Yours faithfully,
Martin Oben.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, in addition, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 957.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93298969072 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86236607499 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675257731959 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1369144519 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6363636364 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.81818181818 4.34317383033 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327227728373 0.216113520407 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102608043875 0.0766984524023 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063729139672 0.0603063233224 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160786882998 0.12726935374 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603188641428 0.0580467560999 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.22 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.