Your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. In your letter
suggest someone you think should receive the award
describe what the person does to help the community
suggest an award that would be appropriate for this person
You should write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter in response to the advertisement which was published yesterday i.e on 16th April 2020. Firstly, you are doing a fantastic job in recognising the persons, who serve the community in their own way and awarding them.
Well, I am an early bird, who goes for morning walks in the outskirts of the city. It is almost at the end of the city. So, I happen to see an elderly person, aged around 60 years, serving and protecting the plants and trees, as they are neglected by community officials.
I have watched him closely since the past 8 years and I am quite surprised towards his dedication and enthusiasm in protecting the environment. This person is very kind and down to earth who always goes an extra mile to help the needy.
Now, doing such kind of service at his age is something unimaginable and could be an ideal for the young juvenile of our country. I would suggest this person to be awarded something proper like "One Man Army" for his unconditional love towards the society.
Thank you for asking our suggestions.
Yours Faithfully,
Ramya Sai Bacha
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, so, thus, well, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 928.0 937.175257732 99% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78350515464 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69799940052 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670103092784 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.331701601 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3636363636 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6363636364 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54545454545 4.34317383033 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238174953471 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729756094712 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388383074497 0.0603063233224 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105130604559 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0244301073027 0.0580467560999 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.