Your local newspaper is offering an award for people who have helped the community. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. In your letter
suggest someone you think should receive the award
describe what the person does to help the community
suggest an award that would be appropriate for this person
Dear Sir,
My name is Saibaba.Currently,I am residing in T.NAGAR.I am writing this letter regarding your advertisement about the award for the person who contributed to the surrounding environment.
I would like to recommend Mr.Ravi Shanmugam, for his dedication in improving our area.He is the head of our Union.After he took over the position, did lot of improvement in our surroundings. Previously, there was no proper drainage system and due to this plenty of communicable diseases spread in the near by areas ,but now because of his striving effort we got satisfactory drainage .Moreover, he also supported environment by writing petition to collector,in order to stop building the industries near the farming land and rivers.Apart from this,his involvement in providing education for poor children are numerous.He is taking free tuition and also providing many school supplies as freebies for the children under poverty.
Here I kindly suggesting you to give him The Humanity Award for all this contributions to the society which will be an example for the current and future generations. This will also give awareness to the society how everyone should contribute to surroundings in positive manner.
Looking forward to your positive step.
Yours Faithfully,
Saibaba
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| 2019-04-20 | sandip rani | 84 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, moreover, regarding, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1091.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5101010101 4.54256449028 121% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.25193309749 2.54303337028 128% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.686868686869 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 16.3608247423 171% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 158.546844941 44.8134815571 354% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 155.857142857 76.5299724578 204% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 28.2857142857 16.8248392259 168% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 4.34317383033 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 2.54639175258 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146552568797 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765703247177 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538541233373 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0950938571346 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511507045237 0.0580467560999 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 8.37731958763 223% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 34.6 70.7449484536 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 7.45979381443 206% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 8.71597938144 172% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 7.59969072165 129% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 8.62886597938 232% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.2 8.54432989691 154% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 8.15463917526 184% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.