you are the member of a public library.You borrowed a book from the library,but could not return it by the due date.
Write a letter to the librarian..In your leeter
-Mention the name of the borrowed book,and the due date for returning it
-describe the reason for not returning it
-inform him when you will return it.
Dear Sir,
My name is Saibaba. I am a member of your library. I am writing this letter to inform you about the book which I was not able to return on due date.
I took the book ‘Harry Potter’ from your library on 18-May-2018. Unfortunately, as I become sick I was not able to return the book on 01-Jun-2018.I was sick for past two weeks and doctor has suggested to take full bed rest, so I was forced to stay at home. I tried to renew the book through online, but it didn’t allow me to do the same. At this moment I could not be able to return the book immediately. Kindly requesting you to consider my situation and renew the book for another two weeks, so that I could return it on 1-July-2018.
I hope you will be compassionate enough to understand my problem. Your help is really appreciated.
Yours Faithfully,
Saibaba
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... was not able to return on due date. I took the book 'Harry Potter' ...
^
Line 4, column 157, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... able to return the book on 01-Jun-2018.I was sick for past two weeks and doctor ...
^
Line 4, column 202, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggested taking'.
Suggestion: suggested taking
... sick for past two weeks and doctor has suggested to take full bed rest, so I was forced to stay ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, may, really, so, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 704.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 155.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54193548387 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88127905463 2.54303337028 113% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 127.690721649 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 211.5 290.88556701 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.191765697 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 64.0 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0909090909 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.54545454545 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.297673355834 0.216113520407 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107218376898 0.0766984524023 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778718678598 0.0603063233224 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198239999518 0.12726935374 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112245678582 0.0580467560999 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.46 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.67 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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