you are the member of a public library.You borrowed a book from the library,but could not return it by the due date.Write a letter to the librarian..In your leeter-Mention the name of the borrowed book,and the due date for returning it-describe the reason

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you are the member of a public library.You borrowed a book from the library,but could not return it by the due date.

Write a letter to the librarian..In your leeter

-Mention the name of the borrowed book,and the due date for returning it

-describe the reason for not returning it

-inform him when you will return it.

Dear Sir,

my name is Aman, I have a membership of the library since last year and I am writing this mail with regards to the book name "UFT Insider", which I borrowed from the library last week and Its due date is of tomorrow i.e. 27/10/2019.

I am sorry to inform you but I would not be able to return a book on the said date as I forgot my a book in my hometown during my last visit, it is 150kms far away from our city. it is not practical to go back in order to collect a book, though I have planned itinerary by the next week to go for my brother wedding. so I would be taking it back by the next week.

Once again I feel bad for not able to return the book on the due date, though I can assure you to return it by next Monday without any failure.

I apologise for any inconvenience caused to you and your staff because of this.

Yours faithfully,

A Kansal

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Sir, my name is Aman, I have a membership of ...
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...t, it is 150kms far away from our city. it is not practical to go back in order to...
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Suggestion: So
...next week to go for my brother wedding. so I would be taking it back by the next w...
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...uld be taking it back by the next week. Once again I feel bad for not able to re...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...because of this. Yours faithfully, A Kansal
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, i feel

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 726.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.14857142857 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37212382235 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 127.690721649 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 225.0 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 74.196099793 44.8134815571 166% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.714285714 76.5299724578 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 16.8248392259 149% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.14285714286 4.34317383033 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27956380454 0.216113520407 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113136461491 0.0766984524023 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0830637700902 0.0603063233224 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165769415958 0.12726935374 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0605530613381 0.0580467560999 104% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.48 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.09 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.86 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 8.62886597938 197% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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