Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat.
Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter
• explain the reasons for the noise
• apologies
• describe what action you will take
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter in regard to charity work which I was continuing for the last two years. I feel bad to inform you that I would not be able to continue my duties after this month.
I was part of "being human" social community, where we planned several drives to educate children and distributing them clothes and toys. I loved my duties and all the time which I spent with donations camps.
As you might be aware, I am traveling to Canada for higher studies, it would not be possible for me to keep doing the work for "being human" organization. Although I assure you, I would keep doing volunteering activities once I get to settle in a new country.
As my place would be vacant in the organization. it would be a pleasure for me to introduce my brother, who always wanted to start his life with charity work. he has been part of some activities which occurred on weekends. Now he has complete time to devote to social activities.
I hope you would be kind enough to give an opportunity to my brother in my place.
Yours faithfully,
A Kansal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter in regard to ch...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...tinue my duties after this month. I was part of 'being human' soc...
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Line 9, column 149, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...and distributing them clothes and toys. I loved my duties and all the time which ...
^
Line 13, column 271, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... once I get to settle in a new country. As my place would be vacant in the organ...
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Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... get to settle in a new country. As my place would be vacant in the organiz...
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Line 17, column 50, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...ce would be vacant in the organization. it would be a pleasure for me to introduce...
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Line 17, column 160, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
...ed to start his life with charity work. he has been part of some activities which ...
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Line 25, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...her in my place. Yours faithfully, A Kansal
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, i feel, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 922.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70408163265 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78019562503 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59693877551 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.3611312254 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.8333333333 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.091522511538 0.216113520407 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0393801848233 0.0766984524023 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547758657171 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.039359992937 0.12726935374 31% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0306194556356 0.0580467560999 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.