Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat.
Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter
• explain the reasons for the noise
• apologise
• describe what action you will take
ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course
Dear Sir or Madam,
I hope this letter finds you well. I have receive a letter which contain some compliments about my flat which seemed noisy from my neighbours. I really apologize from this issue which bothered you.
Let me explain in details. As my brother was spending the last days in Tehran and he supposed to fly on 15th August, it was important for my family to make him a goodbye-party. However, my parent’s house was too small for doing this plan and we decided to make it on my flat. furthermore, thus I told Alexander whom is warden of department about this issue and he aware me there is no problem if I finish the party before 11 p.m.
beside that, since the flight was exactly on that night at 2 a.m. Suddenly, my family decided to stay in my house and go to airport from there. I am apologizing for all the troubles which my family and I brought to you .
furthermore, I promise I never repeat this action again and I hope you would consider my situation. beside that, I deeply feel sorry through it and I wish I could anything you tell me to recompense for you.
Your faithfully,
Chi Chung
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 44, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'received'.
Suggestion: received
...hope this letter finds you well. I have receive a letter which contain some compliments...
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Line 5, column 145, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... which seemed noisy from my neighbours. I really apologize from this issue which ...
^
Line 9, column 282, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Furthermore
...n and we decided to make it on my flat. furthermore, thus I told Alexander whom is warden o...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Beside
... I finish the party before 11 p.m. beside that, since the flight was exactly on t...
^^^^^^
Line 13, column 219, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...les which my family and I brought to you . furthermore, I promise I never rep...
^^
Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Furthermore
...h my family and I brought to you . furthermore, I promise I never repeat this action a...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 17, column 60, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ise I never repeat this action again and I hope you would consider my situation. ...
^^
Line 17, column 102, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Beside
...I hope you would consider my situation. beside that, I deeply feel sorry through it an...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, really, so, thus, well, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 48.0 32.9175257732 146% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 936.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54368932039 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59408144805 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626213592233 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.5469355055 44.8134815571 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0909090909 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7272727273 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176401305934 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0778099017782 0.0766984524023 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.042350954003 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0987188927603 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492152550595 0.0580467560999 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.98 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.