Some people argue that it is more important to have an enjoyable job than to earn a lot of money. Others disagree and think that a good salary leads to a better life.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
it is considered by some that work should be enjoyable rather than getting high wages, whilst others advocate that a better income provides the lavish life. this essay will argue that despite having a luxury life, money could not buy happiness. So choosing the cherishable Worklife is recommended.
On the one hand, some people believe money could provide you with everything, which a person ever dream of. this is because many people work in order to complete their wishes and a good payout could help them to get things which could make them happy. For example, the survey conducted by The times in march 2019, reported that 80% of people would leave their jobs if they would get the money by sitting at home. However, people often get bored with materialistic things, which could lead them to chase a new dream.
On another hand, A satisfactory job keeps a human live and happy for a longer time. In other words, many employees spend their large proportion of time in their offices. if they feel comfortable in the workplace, they remain joyful at their home. In addition, people work efficiently when they are happy, which makes them more productive than other dissatisfied staff. For instance, the study showed in Amity University in march 2019, stated that Google, Microsoft, IBM and other big companies spend nearly 1 billion dollars every year in order to make their work environment healthy, by organising multiple fest and games. Therefore, it is agreed working in a suitable environment is far better than working for a handsome salary.
To conclude, this essay suggests that selecting employment in the account of getting better wages could give temporary achievements, yet picking enjoyable job gives a lifetime treasure.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10763888889 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54947192547 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614583333333 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9963984323 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.071428571 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5714285714 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.85714285714 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176061382543 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600441352829 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0448733311545 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115188046352 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039426210877 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.