You rent an apartment and recently a new neighbour has moved in who lives above you. They are making a lot of noise and this is disturbing you.
Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter:
Explain what the problem is
Explain why it is disturbing you so much
Tell your landlord what you would like him/her to do about it
Dear neighbor,
First of all, I welcome you to the new house. I hope this home comes with more happiness in your life.
Although, I have a concern related to the noise coming from your house. Currently, I am studying in a local college in the final semester and I have an examination coming next week. For studies, I require peace and also a sound sleep to concentrate better in my studies, yet the voice of music coming from your home is making me unable to study or sleep.
The volume is that louder that even after closing my windows I am able to hear the complete music.
I won't say to close the music though if you could lower down the volume after 10 pm that would be appreciatable. also, It would be great if you close your window so that the voice will not come outside. my exam would be ended by this month and I will go to my hometown for the next complete month. Probably at that time you could play your music.
Your Faithfully,
Aman
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... with more happiness in your life. Although, I have a concern related to the noise ...
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Line 17, column 114, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
...fter 10 pm that would be appreciatable. also, It would be great if you close your wi...
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Line 17, column 204, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...o that the voice will not come outside. my exam would be ended by this month and I...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 794.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41111111111 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27017022258 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8869566949 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.1818181818 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3636363636 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184040635945 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811145412496 0.0766984524023 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0577948213504 0.0603063233224 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102019433671 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0727809821152 0.0580467560999 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.0 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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