Your local travel agent recommended a place to visit and you are now having a good time there. Write a letter to your travel agent and tell them the following:
– what you have been doing
– what you hope to do before the end of your holiday
– say why you like this place
Dear Sir/Madam,
Hope you are doing well. My name is Ramesh Singh. I met you last week at your agency office to make an enquiry about the places to visit in and around Calcutta.I am writing this letter to appreciate your recommendation.Me and my family are indeed having a good time at Science Museum.Kids are also very happy as this place is totally new to them but, they found it very interesting.
First,this museum is so big and there are many activities to do.There total four floors and every floor has something interesting to offer.On the ground floor,we have different monuments to see with their detailed description.On the first floor,there is a sci-fi theatre where they have arranged a special programme for kids.Third and fourth floor comprises of an exhibition and interesting games for adults as well as for kids respectively.
I would like meet few of the staff who helped us a lot during our visit before we leave.
Thanks again for your valuable suggestion.
Yours sincerely,
Ramesh Singh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... valuable suggestion. Yours sincerely, Ramesh Singh
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, third, well, as for, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 845.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97058823529 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85873275092 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.741176470588 0.622605031667 119% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 290.88556701 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 157.958790803 44.8134815571 352% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 120.714285714 76.5299724578 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2857142857 16.8248392259 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.14285714286 4.34317383033 187% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 2.54639175258 511% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23505390181 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102490127915 0.0766984524023 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0806173952314 0.0603063233224 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116737345025 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102641119526 0.0580467560999 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 8.37731958763 168% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 70.7449484536 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.