Your neighbors have a dog that is noisy at night. You can’t sleep. Write a letter to your neighbors. In your letter:
– describe the problem with the dog
– explain why it is important for you to sleep
– outline what your neighbors could do about the situation.
Dear Mrs. Greg,
My name is Jot and I am residing in the flat next to your flat. I am writing this to bring your attention to a problem that I have been facing because of your dog at night.
As you may be aware, your pet use to make different noises in the midnight. It is mostly running in your lawn and braking loudly. It makes me awake in the midnight and my sleep gets disturbed.
It would not be a problem, if I would not have appeared in my exams which are going to start next week. I have to awake early in the morning for studies and I need peaceful sleep at the right hours. This is a crucial time for me as it is my final semester and I need to work hard to attain higher grades.
I would like to request you please if possible ask some other family member to keep your dog for few weeks or till my exams are over or either keeps him inside the house and teaches him not to make noise in the night.
I would be looking forward to your action.
Yours Sincerely,
Jot
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 31, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...t night. As you may be aware, your pet use to make different noises in the midnigh...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...midnight and my sleep gets disturbed. It would not be a problem, if I would not ...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 789.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.02551020408 4.54256449028 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.03337290549 2.54303337028 80% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 244.8 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6776198067 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.7272727273 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8181818182 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.54545454545 4.34317383033 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2893400033 0.216113520407 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107372920623 0.0766984524023 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.081187970994 0.0603063233224 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153256414368 0.12726935374 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642105870048 0.0580467560999 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 88.06 70.7449484536 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.8 8.71597938144 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.41 7.59969072165 84% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.