Dear neighbors,
I am terriblely sorry about the noice from my house. Please accept my sincere apologies for the discomfort caused.
The noise bothered you emits from the refurinshing work of my kitchen. I am replacing the old gas stove with a new electrical stove. Due to the work of dettaching the old gas stove from the wall, noisy sound was released during the dettaching and installing. The dettaching procedure was completed yesterday; the follewing step will be be such noisy as its precursor.
I will tell the workers to work gentlely on installing. I promise there will be no loud noise in the following day. All the work will be proceeded in a quiet and slow manner. Thank you for your understanding and forgiveness. I am grateful for your letter regarding the noisy matter from my flat.
Yours sincerely,
Jim Pan from NO 7
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 24, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[4]
Message: The pronoun 'you' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'emit'
Suggestion: emit
...mfort caused. The noise bothered you emits from the refurinshing work of my kitche...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 334, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: be
...eted yesterday; the follewing step will be be such noisy as its precursor. I will ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 32.9175257732 46% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 705.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 145.0 206.0 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86206896552 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47010008196 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81983799638 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 127.690721649 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.606896551724 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 208.8 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.7363996147 44.8134815571 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 58.75 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.0833333333 16.8248392259 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.08333333333 4.34317383033 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237594223647 0.216113520407 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0931769470631 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0907350232404 0.0603063233224 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134153204206 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.106199444214 0.0580467560999 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.02 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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