In the process of urbanization of city, old buildings usually demolished in order to build modern buildings in the site. In this essay, I will talk about the advantages and disadvantages of this practice and express my opinion on this.
The disadvantages of knock down old buildings and build up new buildings are the elimination of land mark and heritage. An old building is a landmark for a city. Because the old buildings has stood on the site for decades or even centuries. Another thing is, an old building is heritage for people. Important events happened in it, it stands in the memory of the one who have saw it. Thus a landmark and heritages disappear when an old building is knocked down.
The advantage of building a modern building in the site of old building is that it moves the city toward modernity. Living standard improve with time pass by. People nowadays need larger space, better lighting and better air conditioning. These all provided by modern building. Another advantage is modern building provide better resistance against earthquake. Modern building use better materials and advanced technology, which offer better protection in case of natural disaster.
In my opinion, rebuild and redesign old building has more advantages over disadvantages. First, old building will abandoned or demolished eventually. That means someday in the future, it will lost the function of providing shelter. Second, new building provide better solution to transportation. City need new buildings to upgrade its transportation system.
In summary, the advantages of rebuild old buildings in city outweigh its disadvantages. I strongly support build new buildings.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 377, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'seen'.
Suggestion: seen
...tands in the memory of the one who have saw it. Thus a landmark and heritages disap...
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Line 3, column 385, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
... the memory of the one who have saw it. Thus a landmark and heritages disappear when...
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Line 7, column 115, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'abandon'
Suggestion: abandon
...disadvantages. First, old building will abandoned or demolished eventually. That means so...
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Line 7, column 193, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'lose'
Suggestion: lose
...at means someday in the future, it will lost the function of providing shelter. Seco...
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'second', 'so', 'thus', 'another thing', 'in summary', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.291946308725 0.247107183377 118% => OK
Verbs: 0.137583892617 0.155533422707 88% => OK
Adjectives: 0.104026845638 0.0946595960268 110% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0268456375839 0.0501214627716 54% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0369127516779 0.0437548338989 84% => OK
Prepositions: 0.124161073826 0.122226691241 102% => OK
Participles: 0.0335570469799 0.0403226058552 83% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.98591867412 2.80594681477 106% => OK
Infinitives: 0.010067114094 0.0326793684256 31% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.00671140939597 0.00163938923432 409% => OK
Determiners: 0.10067114094 0.0861772015684 117% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.010067114094 0.021408717616 47% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.010067114094 0.011925033212 84% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1684.0 1933.35771543 87% => OK
No of words: 266.0 316.048096192 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.33082706767 6.12580529183 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20517956788 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.424812030075 0.374742101984 113% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.345864661654 0.28420135186 122% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.259398496241 0.203846283523 127% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.15037593985 0.137316102897 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98591867412 2.80594681477 106% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.037074148 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548872180451 0.56093040696 98% => OK
Word variations: 54.7128794103 60.7387585426 90% => OK
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0891783567 131% => OK
Sentence length: 12.6666666667 20.7743622355 61% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.6844328573 49.517814964 54% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.1904761905 127.492653851 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.6666666667 20.7743622355 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.333333333333 0.814263465372 41% => More Discourse Markers wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 3.99599198397 100% => OK
Readability: 47.2531328321 49.1944974215 96% => OK
Elegance: 2.23333333333 1.69124875643 132% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.376079445818 0.332605444948 113% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0958231808655 0.102741220458 93% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0880510051989 0.0668466124924 132% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.478055696461 0.534860350844 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.1385283924 0.148594505496 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118617190939 0.134430193775 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10227681351 0.0742795772207 138% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.312214517487 0.324371583561 96% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0203831466449 0.0638462369009 32% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251851675449 0.228012699653 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101488750127 0.058150111329 175% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.68436873747 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.41683366733 146% => OK
Positive topic words: 9.0 5.90881763527 152% => OK
Negative topic words: 5.0 2.5751503006 194% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 1.9629258517 255% => OK
Total topic words: 19.0 10.4468937876 182% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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