The table illustrates the percentage of travel with different means of transportation in four countries. The bar chart demonstrates the most cited reasons for people choose to work by car in Canada.
Looking from the table, the four different countries are Canada, Belgium, Germany and Netherland, and the means of transportation are car, bicycle, public transport, on foot and other. Canadians favor travel by car because 90% of their journey made by cars, which is the biggest among the four countries. The second large coverage of viechle journey happened in Belgium, which the percentage is 72%. The majority mean of travel is by car in Germany. However, public transportation consititutes 18% of the journey, that is the highest comparing to the other three countries. The percentage of journeys by car is the smallest in Netherland, which is 47%, whereas the percentages of bicycle and on foot are the highest in all the four countries.
Seeing from the bar chart, most people in Canada choose travel to work by car simply because they have no alternative. Another reason is that car is a necessity for work. Canadian likewise enjoys the convenience of traveling by car. Other reasons include quicker and night shift.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 57, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to travel'
Suggestion: to travel
...bar chart, most people in Canada choose travel to work by car simply because they have...
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Discourse Markers used:
['however', 'if', 'likewise', 'look', 'second', 'so', 'whereas']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.320346320346 0.268076937826 119% => OK
Verbs: 0.116883116883 0.116061578633 101% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0692640692641 0.0759168565197 91% => OK
Adverbs: 0.012987012987 0.0366838410393 35% => Some adverbs wanted.
Pronouns: 0.00865800865801 0.0131127313244 66% => OK
Prepositions: 0.155844155844 0.155750635184 100% => OK
Participles: 0.021645021645 0.0379272487307 57% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.86228379067 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Infinitives: 0.012987012987 0.0210936926555 62% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00175180941692 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.112554112554 0.0948980150116 119% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0 0.00437022459523 0% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.017316017316 0.00967000014798 179% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1232.0 1161.00487805 106% => OK
No of words: 201.0 196.9 102% => OK
Chars per words: 6.12935323383 5.90752243213 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 3.73763899035 101% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.388059701493 0.337110787985 115% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.28855721393 0.247514529752 117% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.194029850746 0.171178102325 113% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.129353233831 0.112407865282 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86228379067 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517412935323 0.546246751206 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 45.2838426661 49.3433353143 92% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 8.93414634146 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.75 23.0094962315 73% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9194173876 42.9750493124 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.666666667 135.714022679 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.75 23.0094962315 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.583333333333 0.689975730869 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.84146341463 78% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.48048780488 68% => OK
Readability: 45.605721393 47.7609492067 95% => OK
Elegance: 3.59375 2.94281807926 122% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.542114192524 0.418131533498 130% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.126257183801 0.181151798455 70% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0756369770998 0.0850326197045 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.592027372507 0.706616315825 84% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.149469927359 0.157042692854 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.26976783501 0.228904883108 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138727971919 0.108899403657 127% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.458710862232 0.367819155151 125% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0949611881644 0.0812612215331 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.40740010233 0.316326947829 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131448127489 0.0921553760075 143% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70731707317 54% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.14146341463 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.08536585366 220% => Less neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 2.0 3.16585365854 63% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 0.956097560976 105% => OK
Neutral topic words: 9.0 3.02926829268 297% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 7.1512195122 168% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.