Dear John,
Hope you are doing good. I am writing this letter in response to your letter for expressing my apology about the noise from my apartment. I felt very embarrass after reading your letter that yesterday you had to suffer from this inconvenience.
Firstly, I would like to tell you that the top floor two room set was given to the MBBS students on rent by me and those pupils are pursuing their MBBS in the Baba farid university nearest to my house. Yesterday night one of the student celebrated his birthday party in the room and he invited some friends for this auspicious occasion. Having impartial investigated ,I came to know that they broken some outside window as well as cupboards and listened the songs at very high volume.
According to your complaint, I took a strict action the instructions have been given to them by me that if they will create any kind of problem next time then they can have to leave my house and the apology will not be acceptable again regard any noise problem.
Once again ,I am extremely sorry for this inconvenience and thanks for your patience on this matter.
Yours sincerely,
Arshdeepsingh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to your letter for expressing my apology about the noise from my apartment. I fel...
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Message: This is a non-standard collocation. Normally, 'last night' is used.
Suggestion: Last night
...a farid university nearest to my house. Yesterday night one of the student celebrated his birth...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... occasion. Having impartial investigated ,I came to know that they broken some out...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...istened the songs at very high volume. According to your complaint, I took a st...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... regard any noise problem. Once again ,I am extremely sorry for this inconvenie...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, so, then, well, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 960.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56731377124 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.66 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.3402887156 44.8134815571 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.666666667 76.5299724578 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2222222222 16.8248392259 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.11111111111 4.34317383033 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326206690746 0.216113520407 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132185952356 0.0766984524023 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105737520682 0.0603063233224 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179389114293 0.12726935374 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.127798599019 0.0580467560999 220% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 8.37731958763 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.