Your neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your houseflat.Write a letter to your neighbors. In your letterExplain the reasons for the noise.ApologizeDescribe what action you will take.

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Your neighbors have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your houseflat.

Write a letter to your neighbors. In your letter

Explain the reasons for the noise.

Apologize

Describe what action you will take.

Dear Mr. Sampad,

I am writing to sincerely apologize regarding the unpleasant sound that is originating from my flat for the last couple of days. Let me explain the situation for your better understanding.

my wife has resumed her teaching career from the very beginning of October and therefore, she leaves the residence in the early hour of the morning. In addition, I also leave the house at around 9 am. Due to this, unfortunately, my toddlers have to stay at home with the nanny who is absolutely novice in this profession. As a result, she fails to control my kids from making sound by different toys like rechargeable car riding, dragging rough toys and furniture, etc. I am extremely shameful for the inconvenience they are causing. However, I have taken a step to recruit a new experienced nanny for my children which will hopefully minimize your disturbances to a great extent. Moreover, I have taken away all the heavy and sound-making playing materials from my youngsters. If there is any further inconvenience, please, do not hesitate to inform me.

Sorry, once again for your trouble.

sincerely Yours

A T M Jakir Alam

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Sincerely
...orry, once again for your trouble. sincerely Yours A T M Jakir Alam
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, in addition, as a result, to a great extent

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 973.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0414507772 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98696461922 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.709844559585 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0964851207 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0833333333 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0833333333 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 4.34317383033 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176647468942 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731675013228 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748844630132 0.0603063233224 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142599049011 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419265947885 0.0580467560999 72% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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