Dear Susan,
I am Marry and I has become your neighbor for roughly 3 months. I definitely love this place because there is not only a extremely beautiful but also quite quiet. Unluckily, I could not sleep at night because of Tom's dog that you gave for your son in his birthday on last week. the kennel of the dog is quite near my bed room and he was strongly noisy at night, so I can not sleep well. In the other hand, my daughter has a allergy with hair of animals like dogs that the reason why I always keep she away from them. But Tom often play with the dog in front of my house.
I wonder that you could chance dog's kennel from old place to the garden and keep him far away from my house . in the other hand, I have a paramount importance job in this week and if this situation is still continue I will not complete my duty at time.
I extremely sorry about this inconvenience. I am looking forward from you soon.
your sincerely,
Anna
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 6, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'married'.
Suggestion: Married
Dear Susan, I am Marry and I has become your neighbor for roug...
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Line 2, column 18, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
Dear Susan, I am Marry and I has become your neighbor for roughly 3 mont...
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Line 2, column 120, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ve this place because there is not only a extremely beautiful but also quite quie...
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Line 2, column 279, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
... your son in his birthday on last week. the kennel of the dog is quite near my bed ...
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Line 2, column 423, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ell. In the other hand, my daughter has a allergy with hair of animals like dogs ...
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Line 3, column 108, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...rden and keep him far away from my house . in the other hand, I have a paramount ...
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Line 3, column 111, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...n and keep him far away from my house . in the other hand, I have a paramount imp...
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Line 3, column 129, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... away from my house . in the other hand, I have a paramount importance job in thi...
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Line 3, column 209, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'continued'.
Suggestion: continued
...his week and if this situation is still continue I will not complete my duty at time. ...
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Line 3, column 255, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ue I will not complete my duty at time. I extremely sorry about this inconvenien...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Your
...e. I am looking forward from you soon. your sincerely, Anna
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, still, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 763.0 937.175257732 81% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.1693989071 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.21338486092 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622950819672 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1694770693 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 69.3636363636 76.5299724578 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6363636364 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.27272727273 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 2.54639175258 432% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126527736884 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572038894162 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063164043378 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0635280190017 0.12726935374 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262195062618 0.0580467560999 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.61 8.71597938144 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.07 7.59969072165 80% => OK
difficult_words: 19.0 41.2886597938 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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