Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat.
Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter
* explain the reasons for the noise
* apologise
* describe what action you will take
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Mrs.Von,
I hope you are doing well.
I am writing this letter to respond on your complaint letter that I get yesterday evening.
It is a shame that we do not know each other very well and I would like to apologise for that. I am sincerely apologise for the inconvenience and humbly ask for you forgiveness. I have never had such problems before with my previous neighbours.
We just have moved to this flat therefore our moving could be cause of the noise. We brought our furniture and stuff to our new place to live. It was necessary to assembly our furniture, wardrobes and beds before evening yesterday.
I really regret the event and request your forgiveness. Please accept this box of chocolate as a token of my deepest regret for the inconvenience. I hope we would not disturb you again. I will issue a warning next time before.
Yours sincerely,
Sofia
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Von
Dear Mrs.Von, I hope you are doing well. I am w...
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Line 5, column 111, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'apologised'.
Suggestion: apologised
...e to apologise for that. I am sincerely apologise for the inconvenience and humbly ask fo...
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Line 8, column 23, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...s neighbours. We just have moved to this apartments therefore our moving could b...
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Line 8, column 66, Rule ID: BE_CAUSE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'because'?
Suggestion: because
...s apartments therefore our moving could be cause of the noise. We brought our furniture ...
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Line 8, column 239, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...obes and beds before evening yesterday. I really regret the event and request yo...
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Line 10, column 71, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...request your forgiveness. Please accept this box of chocolate as a token of my deepe...
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Line 12, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng next time before. Yours sincerely, Sofia
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
really, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 735.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 154.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77272727273 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74263607187 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668831168831 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.174920131 44.8134815571 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 56.5384615385 76.5299724578 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.8461538462 16.8248392259 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.07692307692 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206994597763 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714824342157 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684253226632 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0980381023484 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709793418659 0.0580467560999 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 70.7449484536 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.5 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.