Your office building does not have parking available.
Write a letter to the manager. In your letter:
-explain the problem
-suggest a solution
-say why parking would benefit all employees
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Start with:
Dear Mr ____,
Dear Mr. Prescott,
I am writing this letter to express my concerns related to the non-availability of car parking near our office which is a major cause for us to arrive late in the office premises.
Earlier, I used to park my car in the public parking space which was just opposite the office building. Since it has been shut down and there is a notice written that the government is going to build a hospital on the land. Therefore, it is trouble for me to find a vacant space near the office building.
I urge you to please rent a parking space which is available on the underground floor of our building. You can deduct a small number of monthly wages from an employee's account by giving the rent space. Not only this will benefit the employees to park their cars without taking any pains to find a vacate space for car parking, but also will company by providing workers productivity to reach on time in the office premises as well as not cause any trouble on the company's budget. I am hoping that you will consider taking my suggestion to solve this problem.
I am looking forward to hearing a positive response from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Shain Bhasin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 119, Rule ID: SMALL_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, use 'a few', or use 'some'
Suggestion: a few; some
...d floor of our building. You can deduct a small number of monthly wages from an employees account...
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Line 7, column 296, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...r cars without taking any pains to find a vacate space for car parking, but also will co...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, so, therefore, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 977.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 213.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58685446009 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82027741392 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53722750637 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582159624413 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 301.5 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.0761338503 44.8134815571 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.7 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3 16.8248392259 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.8 4.34317383033 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346471256574 0.216113520407 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118296779478 0.0766984524023 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0877290636892 0.0603063233224 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181165143557 0.12726935374 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112125811954 0.0580467560999 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.