your recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school asked for your feedback on this course.
write a letter to the course director at the cookery school.in your letter
. describe what you enjoyed about the course
. say how much cooking you have done since the course
. suggest another cookery course you would like the school to offer
Dear sir or madam,
I am writing to reply to your letter which you asked Me to give my feedback about the cookery course.
My name is John Peterson. I am one of your old student. I have acquired numerous things and skills from your college. This course thought several dishes such as Indian cuisine,Chinese cuisine,and so on . In addition,i have improved my communication skills. Staffs are so friendly and have kind in nature. I enjoyed a lot when i was studying.
I have cooked enormous items since my course, initially, i started to cook at Indian cuisine and later i started to cook Chinese, Italian and Arabic cuisines. overall, I have cooked several dishes since my course.
I am also planning to do another cooking-related course. So, I would appreciate if you could suggest me some courses. Moreover, I would know that prospects of course such as course fees details and accommodation options.
Thanks for your time.I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
John peterson.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, so, in addition, of course, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 865.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11834319527 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85400829042 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668639053254 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.13402061856 164% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.0739980226 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.6666666667 76.5299724578 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.2666666667 16.8248392259 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.06666666667 4.34317383033 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 2.54639175258 511% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32100838003 0.216113520407 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0891428538195 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0780921653079 0.0603063233224 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175683705996 0.12726935374 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100854051619 0.0580467560999 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 70.7449484536 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.23 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.