In Britain,when some people get old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them.The government has to pay for his care.Who should be responsible for our old people?Give reasons for your answer.

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In Britain,when some people get old they often go to live in a home with other old people where there are nurses to look after them.The government has to pay for his care.Who should be responsible for our old people?Give reasons for your answer.

With the trend of rapidly aging society, the problem is becoming more serious that who should be responsible for old people. It is not only concerned with living standard of the elderly, but also reflects happiness of the society. In this essay, I will explore three possible solutions for this issue.

The primary duty lies with the government. Since the elderly have been paying taxes to their country for the whole life time, government need to take care of them when they get old. To do this, the country can provide free public transport service and access to tourist attractions, as well as s...

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government need to take care of them
governments need to take care of them

Sentence: Since the elderly have been paying taxes to their country for the whole life time, government need to take care of them when they get old.
Description: An adjective is not usually followed by a verb 'to have', uninflected present tense, infinitive or
Suggestion: Refer to elderly and have

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