Since fast-paced technology advances reached at their peak, there have been viable options for people to work from any place. Hence, the number of people who are in favour of working from home is experiencing a remarkable surge. However, there are both benefits and pitfalls of this way of working. In further paragraphs I will point out both pros and cons and try to draw some conclusions.
Let`s start by looking at the advantages of home working. One of the greatest advantages of doing business at home is that one can save on time and costs. As a matter of fact, tiresome traffic congestion a...
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What do you think why i
What do you think why i cannot get 8 or higher score?
Could you tell me some reasons?
Your essays are little bit
Your essays are little bit underestimated. Totally, they should be around 8.0.
But, we give them 7.5 because some sentences still need to be better developed though there are nothing wrong with them. for example,
'Since fast-paced technology advances reached at their peak, there have been viable options for people to work from any place.'
And there are still some duplicate words or sentences, Look:
No. of Words: 408 while No. of Different Words: 221
Could you evaluate first
Could you evaluate first sentence for me, please? And I will try to do as your example. Thank you beforehand!
There are nothing wrong with
There are nothing wrong with the sentence as we told.
This may be better:
'Over the last few decades, the way people work has changed significantly as a result of rapid pace of technology.'
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 408 350
No. of Characters: 1880 1500
No. of Different Words: 221 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.494 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.608 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.6 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 115 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 95 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 61 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 38 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.4 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.279 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.7 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.319 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.589 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.167 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5