Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Face-to-face communication is better than other types of communication, such as letters, email, or telephone calls. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Face-to-face communication is better than other types of communication, such as letters, email, or telephone calls. Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.

Obviously, I agree with this statement which saying, face-to-face communication is better than other types of communication, even though nowadays are we get sophisticated technology such call and mail. Communication is commonly thing we are doing in our daily activities but actually it is not that easy. So, by confronting each other communication I can get information as clearly as possible could substitute.

First of all, face-to-face communication is purposed for understanding each other between speaker and listener but in real life people often do misunderstanding. For instance, my friend was working as customer service, as we know, customer service is a job which complaint handling, and it has to having good communication among workers inside. He often gets complaint from his customer, but he handle it by never stopping communication with his team through face-to-face communication in order to make it clearly.

Second of all, the information what the speaker is saying seems certain more clearly. For example, my mom had ever ask me to buy medicine in the drug store by facing me, as a result, I can buy it completely, than my mom asked to get same medicine to my brother by calling him, he often bought wrong medicine because call sometime gets not good voice when the signals are disappear.

The last, face to face communication can trainee speaker in order to speaker be able for facing someone else because by nose to nose communication needed natural feelings.

To conclude, face to face communication make clearly what the speaker’s information so that no misunderstanding between speaker and listener and can trainee about shows feelings.

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Sentence: Obviously, I agree with this statement which saying,
Description: A WH-determiner is not usually followed by a verb, present participle or gerund
Suggestion: Refer to which and saying

even though nowadays are we get sophisticated technology
Description: two verbs in one sentence

Communication is commonly thing
Communication is a common thing

Sentence: He often gets complaint from his customer, but he handle it by never stopping communication with his team through face-to-face communication in order to make it clearly.
Description: The fragment he handle it is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace handle with verb, past tense

my mom had ever ask me to buy medicine
my mom had ever asked me to buy medicine

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No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2

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This essay is for IELTS task II not for task I.

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Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 10 15
No. of Words: 268 350
No. of Characters: 1364 1500
No. of Different Words: 150 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.046 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.09 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.155 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 94 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 79 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 52 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 32 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 26.8 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 11.409 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.8 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.448 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.716 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.191 0.07
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