"Failure is proof that the desire was not strong enough", To what extend do you agree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer?

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"Failure is proof that the desire was not strong enough", To what extend do you agree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer?

Every human being has a desire in life and different people have different ways of attempting to achieve their desires. But does everyone succeed in this way? If not, then what are the grounds of failure? In this essay, I will take a closer view at the failure as a result of the weakness of desire.

We must acknowledge that, in order to achieve our goals in life we have to buckle down in this way. For example, a student has to study hard in order not to fail at the exam; a person who wants to quit smoking has to have strong desire for it etc. Moreover, anyone who determined to be successful ...

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