"Fatherhood ought to be emphasized as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up. To what extend do you agree

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"Fatherhood ought to be emphasized as much as motherhood. The idea that women are solely responsible for deciding whether or not to have babies leads to the idea that they are also responsible for bringing the children up.
To what extend do you agree or disagree?

To bring children up is the most important duty of parents and it demands special attention for long periods. I strongly believe that these crucial moments of life should be distributed by the couples with equal manners. All decisions like education, health issues,the methods of nurture as well as to have a baby or not must be made up by a father and a mother from the starting periods, otherwise mothers might force to solve important problems solely in future which increase the probability of failure.

First of all, in some societies fathers are mainly considered to be in charge of econo...

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