Recent innovations in Information technology has made revolutionary changes in every aspect of our live. Up to certain extent I agree that the advantages of Information technology outweigh the drawbacks.
To begin with, some people argue that computer and mobile technology have made our life inactive. Even though they can be easily accessible, their radiations are dangerous to humans and sometimes lead to life threatening diseases like cancer. Besides, there is no alternative of technological waste produced by the gadgets used for Information technology and due to their short life spam, mill...
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our life today greatly influenced by mobile engineering.
our life today is greatly influenced by mobile engineering.
in a productive way than definitely their benefits outweigh the drawbacks,
in a productive way then definitely their benefits outweigh the drawbacks,
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