Many animal species in the world are becoming extinct nowadays. Some people say that countries and individuals should protect these animals from dying out, while others say that we should concentrate more on problems human beings. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
We are blessed with the treasure of nature comprising fuel, water, earth, flora and fauna. Presently, animal species are at the low ebb on account of disgraceful activities of human beings. Therefore, some people claim that the prime responsibility of humans is to prevent animals from extinction by offering them safe environment. By contrast, others are more concerned about hardships of human beings. Here, I would like to account for both sides with my own perception.
Numerous points can be put down to shore up the former view. First and foremost, the role of animals to maintain the food c...
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offering them safe
offering them safe environment
should it be "a safe environment"?
hunters manage their livelihood by killing to predators
should it be "by killing predators"?
contribution in the financial and health prosperity
should it be "contribution to the financial and health prosperity"?
On the contrary, other's views are conflicting
should it be "on the other hand"?
They think that humans are excellent species on the earth than others
should it be "humans are superior species on the earth than others"?
sorry if I get you wrong...
for sake of man's well being
for the sake of man's well being
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