Some people believe that study is important to
success, others say there is no relation
between study and success. Discuss both views.
Give your own opinion based on your
Advancement in the lifesytyle due to modeenity stimulates everyone to be successful. Some proportion of people assert that Education plays a phenomenal role to set the pillar of success. By contrast, others have conflicting views. Here, I would like to throw light on both aspects with my perception.
Numerous points can be put down to support role of education behind success. First and foremost, education provides a great deal of knowledge and skills related to different fields such as science, technology, medical, engineering, agriculture so on to make someone successful. For example, stud...
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Sentence: Advancement in the lifesytyle due to modeenity stimulates everyone to be successful.
Error: lifesytyle Suggestion: lifestyle
Error: modeenity Suggestion: modernity
Sentence: For example, students attain deep knowledge through empirical researches and therotical books to be skilful to succeed in different fields.
Error: therotical Suggestion: theoretical
Error: skilful Suggestion: skillful
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