It is said that the teacher will be replaced by the computer in the future. Do you agree or disagree?
Life without education is like a soup without salt. Presently, it has been extremely debatable whether computer is capable enough to replace teacher from the classroom or not. Here, I would like to discord with given statement firmly.
There are manifold points to support my point of view. First and foremost, unlike computer, teacher plays a phenomenal role to inspire students towards their goals of life. For example, they draw examples of prominent personalities of the world like Abrahim Lincon, Mhatma Gandhi and so on to install spirit of emulation for success. Thus, teachers are exceptio...
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Comments
How could this essay reach at
How could this essay reach at 8.0 ??????
explain problems in detail plzzzz
You need to talk about
You need to talk about something good for computer too.
but erlier u mentioned that
but erlier u mentioned that its always better to write all three paras for whether agree or disagree ?? thn why ??
No problem for the pattern.
No problem for the pattern. Don't make a new paragraph. talking about something good for computer too in the introduction will give more credits.
Sentence: By contrast, modification in educating way by computer seems a far cry accordingly students.
Description: The fragment cry accordingly students is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace accordingly with adjective
Sentence: In addition, unlike computer, the existence of human staff is worthwhile to organize sports, education and talent competitions to invite supreme opportunoties for students to develop good skills and become sportsmen.
Error: opportunoties Suggestion: opportunities
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 298 350
No. of Characters: 1640 1500
No. of Different Words: 189 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.155 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.503 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.009 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 140 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 118 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 88 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 50 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.286 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.053 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.643 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.306 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.584 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.039 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5