It is said that the teacher will be replaced by the computer in the future. Do you agree or disagree?
Life without education is like a soup without salt. Presently, it has been extremely debatable whether computer is capable enough to replace teacher from the classroom or not. Here, I would like to discord with given statement firmly.
There are manifold points to support my point of view. First and foremost, unlike computer, teacher plays a phenomenal role to inspire students towards their goals of life. For example, they draw examples of prominent personalities of the world like Abrahim Lincon, Mhatma Gandhi and so on to install spirit of emulation for success. Thus, teachers are exceptio...
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2019-10-27 | RSudhir | 56 | view |
| 2019-02-28 | Anmolcheema | 22 | view |
| 2018-11-23 | tungductranjra16k73 | 56 | view |
| 2018-04-20 | arsalankalami | 78 | view |
| 2017-05-21 | kingnight153 | 78 | view |
- In many countries there are people with extremely high income. Some say it is good for the country, while others claim that governments should limit salaries. Discuss both views and give your own opinion 88
- The scientist believes that computers will become more intelligent than human beings Some people find it is a positive while others think it is a negative development Discuss both points and give your own opinion 68
- Nowadays many people are diagnosed with anorexia what do you think the causes of this are? What can be done to improve the situation? 89
- Many animal species in the world are becoming extinct nowadays. Some people say that countries and individuals should protect these animals from dying out, while others say that we should concentrate more on problems human beings. Discuss both sides and g 92
- Some people think that governments should provide subsidies to farmers to produce cheap healthy food. Others think that governments should tax companies producing unhealthy foods. Give your own opinion and examples. 80
Comments
How could this essay reach at
How could this essay reach at 8.0 ??????
explain problems in detail plzzzz
You need to talk about
You need to talk about something good for computer too.
but erlier u mentioned that
but erlier u mentioned that its always better to write all three paras for whether agree or disagree ?? thn why ??
No problem for the pattern.
No problem for the pattern. Don't make a new paragraph. talking about something good for computer too in the introduction will give more credits.
Sentence: By contrast, modification in educating way by computer seems a far cry accordingly students.
Description: The fragment cry accordingly students is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace accordingly with adjective
Sentence: In addition, unlike computer, the existence of human staff is worthwhile to organize sports, education and talent competitions to invite supreme opportunoties for students to develop good skills and become sportsmen.
Error: opportunoties Suggestion: opportunities
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 298 350
No. of Characters: 1640 1500
No. of Different Words: 189 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.155 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.503 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.009 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 140 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 118 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 88 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 50 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 21.286 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.053 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.643 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.306 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.584 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.039 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5