Some people think that men and women have different qualities, which is why men are suitable for some types of jobs and women – for different types of jobs. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Some people think that men and women have different qualities, which is why men are suitable for some types of jobs and women – for different types of jobs. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Gone are the days when women were thought to be a weaken member of society. At present, modrenization has given a huge swing to their lives , enabling them to rub shoulder with men in every walk of life. Therefore, both genders have been strong competitors of each other in almost every field. Here, I would like to discord with given statement firmly.

There are numerous points to endorse my point of view. First and foremost, earlier , women had to live inside the boundries of their homes but now they are dominating in politics, education, fashion, sports, business so on. For example, r...

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Use commas surrounding words such as therefore and however when they are used as interrupters.

Examples:
I would, therefore, like the decision.
I would be angry, however, to accept the decision.

But There are many cases for which a comma is unnecessary:
He is strong, and therefore a likely leader.
However strong he is, he is not a likely leader.

As for subordinate clauses, where the words function as subordinating conjunctions, the comma isn't always necessary either.

He is strong, therefore he must be a likely leader.

Suggestion:
if you can reasonably speak the sentence without a noticeable pause after the word however/therefore , don't bother with the comma. Otherwise, use it