Nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the reasons? Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?
Lifestyle has undergone drastic changes over a couple of decades. Presently, it is quite common that most of newly married couples have tendency to give birth to children later in their lives. Here, I would like to account for reasons, benefits and drawbacks of this trend.
Numerous reasons can be put down behind this happening. First and foremost, both parents want to be fully matured, well settled and financially secured before undertaking the responsibilities of juveniles.To demonstrate, in this era of rapid advancement and inflation, both partners have to work outside to be settled in t...
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Essay evaluation report
couples have tendency
couples have the tendency
could get deprive the happiness of parenting
could deprive the happiness of parenting
a considerable difference between their thinking ways is obvious and sometime, it leads to broken families.
a considerable difference between their thinking ways is obvious and sometime, and it leads to broken families.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 319 350
No. of Characters: 1603 1500
No. of Different Words: 197 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.226 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.025 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.827 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 117 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 92 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 57 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 38 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.722 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 9.392 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.254 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.518 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.019 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 206, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: To
...aking the responsibilities of juveniles.To demonstrate, in this era of rapid advan...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, hence, if, may, so, then, well, while, such as, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1664.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23270440252 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95963242201 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625786163522 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 60.0221152659 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4444444444 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72222222222 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160490970184 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.045195634011 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403395910334 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0778469631984 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417530490668 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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