As increasing number of people prefer to stay in nuclear family, it becomes important to be mentally and financially stable before having children. Nowadays, it have become a trend also to have children at later in life. This essay will explain some reasons for this trend and will also describe some advantages of the family planning.
There are many reason for this trend to be so prevalent. Firstly, this trend is more in practice among the working professionals for the reason that they find less time for think about this matter. In earlier days of working career, both husband and wife would be working in separate cities and so they hardly find time to meet. It becomes a little bit difficult to maintain work-life balance. Secondly, people in developing countries are financially not that much stable. So, most of them plan to have babies later when they find themselves in good days.
Furthermore, there are many advantages of parenting children in later age in life. Firstly, by that age, average person understands the responsibilities of having babies. Secondly, almost everybody acquires necessary funds to rear their family. Thirdly, by that time, their life becomes stable and they can spend some quality time with toddlers. Last but not least, a person can teach many this to his or her child.
On the other hand, the major disadvantage of parenting children later in life is that sometime ladies find it difficult to conceive baby. But today in technologically advanced era, this is not a big concern.
In conclusion, it is good to have this great responsibility later in life when actually a person is ready to bare it properly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 162, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
...le before having children. Nowadays, it have become a trend also to have children at...
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Line 3, column 11, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'many reasons'.
Suggestion: many reasons
...es of the family planning. There are many reason for this trend to be so prevalent. Firs...
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Line 3, column 343, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
... hardly find time to meet. It becomes a little bit difficult to maintain work-life balance...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98916967509 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70425306883 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552346570397 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.3015582329 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.2941176471 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2941176471 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.29411764706 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311543156949 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0923996167908 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0656201706029 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164236690031 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393888855136 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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