You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. Say where you think you left the papers. Explain why they are so important. Tell the

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter to inform you that unfortunately i forgot my important papers on the table of room number AW-1907, where I stayed for two days for my business meeting with my company client. These are company's classified papers sealed with Dassault Systems's official file cover.
These contain customer information, so are confidential documents. We have to abide by the law to not open these papers outside. I have left my documents on the big table just besides the room gate. This room, AW-1907, was booked by my company, Dassault Systems, for my official stay for company specific work. As, I checked-in on 20th Dec and checked-out on 23rd Dec, I am sending photocopy of call documents, for you verification, including the the confirmation mail, which i received from you.

Please send these documents to below mentioned company address and also send bill receipt of courier charges, so that I will pay this bill through online transfer as I payed your normal bill after stay.

Sincerely,
Ram

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 59, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...letter to inform you that unfortunately i forgot my important papers on the table...
^
Line 4, column 444, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...uments, for you verification, including the the confirmation mail, which i received fro...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 444, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...uments, for you verification, including the the confirmation mail, which i received fro...
^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 477, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...luding the the confirmation mail, which i received from you. Please send these...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 864.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 171.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05263157895 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73670464992 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.7101666418 44.8134815571 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 76.5299724578 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.375 16.8248392259 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.625 4.34317383033 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126211557824 0.216113520407 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0438731084222 0.0766984524023 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542525730222 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0831577780543 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522948816126 0.0580467560999 90% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 8.37731958763 155% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 41.2886597938 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.