You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. Say where you think you left the papers. Explain why they are so important. Tell the manager what you want him/her to do.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to you regarding some important papers and documents of mine which have been left at your hotel. I was one of the participants in the meeting was hosted at your hotel by IBM three days ago and I was resident in room G507.
I remember that I put my papers in the drawer in my room before going to see a customer. Frankly, those documents were our company’s contract with IBM. I did not bring the contract into another formal meeting because it is easy to mix them. After the final meeting, I got drunk during the celebration, so I forgot to take them back to my suitcase before leaving the hotel for the International Airport at night.
Honestly, those papers and contracts are extremely significant to our company. Furthermore, there is much detailed information about our project with IBM in the contract and our team is waiting for the scheme to implement program.
We would really appreciate it if you could deliver them to us; hence, we will pay the delivery fee. Our company address is No 1, Seaside Street, Tehran, Iran.
I am looking forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.
Yours faithfully,
Tommy Comperor
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...go and I was resident in room G507. I remember that I put my papers in the dr...
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Line 12, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...earliest convenience. Yours faithfully, Tommy Comperor
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
frankly, furthermore, hence, honestly, if, look, really, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 985.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78155339806 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71147250345 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.665048543689 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.360824742268 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4848455023 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.0833333333 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1666666667 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 4.34317383033 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215332503881 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672070285089 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0918890137846 0.0603063233224 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120474801145 0.12726935374 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0937902417552 0.0580467560999 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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