In many countries,children are engaged with some kind of paid work.Some people regard this completely wrong, while others consider it as value able work experience important for learning and responsibilities.Discuss both sides with your opinion.
Children are the future of their country.Presently in some countries ,children are involving in paid work.Some proportions of people assert that children doing paid work leads unsuccessful life as they cannot concentrate on their studies while working.By contrast,others claim that paid work could be beneficial to gain work experience as well as to learn the responsibilities.Here,I would like to account for both sides with my own perception.
There are manifold points to shore up former view.First and foremost,children doing paid work could be irresponsible regarding their education.For examp...
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children doing paid work leads unsuccessful life
children doing paid work lead unsuccessful life
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