Many university students live with their families while others need to live away from home because their universities are in different cities. What are the advantagesand disadvantages in both situations?
Is university simply a place you go for a few hours a day to get a piece of paper? Oris it a place where you grow and change intellectually, socially, and emotionally? In this essay I will explain why I think it’s much better for most students to move away from home when they are in college.
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