In most countries multinational companies and their products are becoming more and more important.
This trend is seriously damaging our quality of life.
Do you agree or disagree?
It is true that the introduction of branded products of global companies has affected people’s lives in many parts of the world. However, I do not agree with the contention that these goods are a negative influence on people, and I believe that they are rather beneficial for several reasons.
In my view, I believe that some products of multinational firms have enriched the quality of people’s lives in terms of social aspect. A smart phone introduced by one of the major companies worldwide, Samsung, has better functions, features, services and design than any other phone, and hence it has...
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