Most leaders or directors generally belong to an older age group, but some people believe that young leaders are better. To what extend do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion.
Nowadays, a great majority of management board do belong to an older age group. Young leaders are sometimes thought to be better. I, personally, totally agree with the first approach, and in this essay I am going to explain why.
We must admit that young people have definite advantages. First of all, it is time, that gives them numerous opportunities to move ahead and grow professionally. Secondly, it is their boldness and opened to welcome new ideas. Thirdly, it is their deep knowledge of modern technologies and absence of fear. Are these qualities enough to be able to perform their man...
- In many countries today insufficient respect is shown to older people. What do you think may be the reason for this? What problems might this cause in society? 80
- Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations. Discuss both of these views and give your opinion. 90
- A recent study showed that both developed and developing countries prosper because of economic growth People from developing countries are much happier than before while people from developed countries are not as happy as they were in the past Why is that 62
- The number of elderly people in the world is increasing What do you think are the positive and negative effects of this trend 70
- Individuals can do nothing to change society Any new developments can only be brought about by governments and large institutions How far do you agree or disagree 65
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