Most leaders or directors generally belong to an older age group, but some people believe that young leaders are better. To what extend do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion.
Nowadays, a great majority of management board do belong to an older age group. Young leaders are sometimes thought to be better. I, personally, totally agree with the first approach, and in this essay I am going to explain why.
We must admit that young people have definite advantages. First of all, it is time, that gives them numerous opportunities to move ahead and grow professionally. Secondly, it is their boldness and opened to welcome new ideas. Thirdly, it is their deep knowledge of modern technologies and absence of fear. Are these qualities enough to be able to perform their man...
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